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Always Watching

by on November 15, 2013

This story was written for Trifecta’s weekend prompt. Ordinarily I don’t go in for scenes of the particular nature they were asking for. But, then, well, my muse suggested something to me , and it related to Constance’s Story, and I couldn’t resist. 🙂

When Constance popped in on the newlyweds, her eyes went dinner-plate wide. She hadn’t expected that.  And certainly not that. And so soon.  True, when she was alive, she hadn’t exactly been a model of chastity with her loathsome squid ex-boyfriend Ben, but she had never…..  and was that even….clearly, her biology class had left out a few details. She hadn’t even thought that was physically possible.

She coughed, though of course they couldn’t hear her, and busily set about shining her halo, studiously ignoring the energetic activities of the happy couple. Being a guardian angel was so awkward sometimes.

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15 Comments
  1. Kir Piccini permalink

    Oh my, a prudish guardian angel won’t do. 😉
    I love ” her biology class had left out a few details”

    nice write.

  2. This is the cutest story and I love it.

  3. So XXX sweet…makes you think twice about your actions when there could be a shiny halo near by lol:)

  4. I can sense her discomfort! Nice angle…

  5. Glynis permalink

    I sure that was a surprise! Great take on the prompt!

  6. Love it, especially the dinner-plate eyes! I never thought about things from the guardian angel’s perspective. Talk about awkward. 🙂

  7. So funny! I really like this 🙂

  8. This piece is a gem! And “loathsome squid” is hilarious perfection! Your muse did you proud with this one!

  9. My Lord, this was hilarious and wonderfully wicked!

  10. Draug419 permalink

    I found it amusing that she couldn’t look away at first haha Great job!

  11. KymmInBarcelona permalink

    Nothing more awkward than an embarrassed guardian angel!

  12. Anja permalink

    awww I like the way you did this. Great job!

  13. poor angel. 🙂 Well done.

  14. Ha!ha!So funny-poor guardian angel-what an education she is getting now;-)

  15. it’s like a prurient from Victorian England taking a look at the Kama Sutra…whaaaaaa…???

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